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Post by insigna » Sat Jan 26, 2008 4:33 am

i drew a pic of aya and i thought i'd share it with you guys.
i did her hair style of my own and i wasnt sure what color her eyes were supposed to be, so i just made them blue.

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Post by jjfew » Thu Jan 31, 2008 2:39 am

there's something frightening in the picture ...
I don't know if it's the hands or the fact the head seems so little compare to the braist ... but something frights me.

By the way, you could sharpen some lines to gives some "intention" to the general drawing. The colors are pretty good, but the whole thing has a "too clean" execution.
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Post by Dgames » Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:39 am

It's the background should change it to give more contrast
try to change the nails color and make a bigger head her breast are bigger and the head :P

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Post by kk1 » Sat Feb 02, 2008 3:14 am

Dgames wrote:It's the background should change it to give more contrast
try to change the nails color and make a bigger head her breast are bigger and the head :P
They look about right.

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Post by MetalGravy » Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:29 am

jjfew wrote:there's something frightening in the picture ...
I don't know if it's the hands or the fact the head seems so little compare to the braist ... but something frights me.

By the way, you could sharpen some lines to gives some "intention" to the general drawing. The colors are pretty good, but the whole thing has a "too clean" execution.
You might be thinking of the distance between the top of her breasts and the base of her neck. They seem a bit further apart than they should be.

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